Alright, this one caught me off guard!
Alright, this one caught me off guard!
Some helpful tips:
Stop using gradation for shading and hair lighting.
I recommend getting a versatile non vector paint program, Paint tool SAI is a cheep effective art software that lets you craft your own fairly organic brushes.
Positives:
The gesture and perspective are both done pretty decently, the eyes need a bit of work, but overall, the actual shapes/contour of their bodies isn't awful.
Good luck in future works!
Appreciate the feedback. Seeing as I whip these out just in a few hours during slow work days, I doubt I will make many changes to my current software unless I go pay for full Creative Cloud again. Animate CC does provide its challenges one may not encounter with other programs, I will grant you that! LOL. Thanks for the line!
Nice job with the candy bar!
If you could add some color to this, I wouldn't see this out of place in a 50's advertisement!
It's simplistic, but still very eye catching,
I like it!
Sometimes I like to search for the most simple/efficient/effective way of doing things. Thanks!
Yes.
Geez Boco, the speed at which you post these greatly animated pieces is staggering!
Nice work!
haha not really, i barely post here in NG lately, which i really should change that D:
I like your art style for this.
Thank you!
This begs to be in a book.
It might be just me, but I see the image in the bottom center as the focal point of this piece, almost like a cover, melding everything into a single narrative.
Ya know, Edd was a big part of the reason that I even discovered this website to begin with, and though a great era has passed, an undying legacy has been born.
Context aside, this is a really nice picture, love the lighting.
A dead man once told me you need to learn to draw before you can be an animator, I took him on his words and have been learning to do just that. Wouldn't say I'm a draftsman yet, but I should probably start practicing the animating part of animation now.
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